Topic(题目)：
Some people think that the family is the mostimportant influence on young adults. Otherpeople think that friends are the mostimportant influence on young adults. Whichview do you agree with? Use examples tosupport your position.
Model Essay(范文)：
Although friends make an impression on yourlife, they do not have the same influence that yourfamily has. Nothing is as important to me as my family. From them, I learned everything that isimportant. I learned about trust, ambition, and love.
Your family is with you forever. They are not going to leave you because they find anotherdaughter they like better. They are not going to leave you because they think you are too muchtrouble. A family is permanent, while friends come and go.
Your parents are your role models. They will encourage you to do your best, to pushyourself, and to improve yourself. Friends want you to stay the same: they don't want you to bedifferent. A family is ambitious for you. Friends are not.
Your family teaches you about love. A family's love is not judgmental. They love you foreverything you are. Friends may love you because you have a new car or because you go outwith them on Saturdays. A family loves you. Friends only like you.
Without my family, I wouldn't know what to do. I wouldn't feel as secure. I might not havethe ambition to go to school. I probably would be afraid to love. My family is my greatestinfluence.
重点单词 全部解释
permanent['pə:mənənt]adj. 永久的，持久的
n. 烫发
encourage[in'kʌridʒ]vt. 鼓励，促进，支持
impression[im'preʃən]n. 印象，效果
secure[si'kjuə]adj. 安全的，牢靠的，稳妥的
vt. 固定
ambitious[æm'biʃəs]adj. 有雄心的，有抱负的，野心勃勃的
ambition[æm'biʃən]n. 雄心，野心，抱负，精力
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