Topic(题目)：
Your school has received a gift of money. Whatdo you think is the best way for your school tospend this money? Use specific reasons anddetails to support your choice.
Model Essay(范文)：
A gift of money is generous and welcomed at ourschool. There are many tings that my school could use. To decide, one must consider theamount of the gift and understand that it is a one-time ting. Keeping this in mind, I think thatmy school could most benefit form new classroom fixtures.
If you looked at our school, you would agree that nearly all of the classrooms could use newdesks, chairs, chalkboards, bookshelves and cabinets. Our school is old and the people who livehere aren't very wealthy. New equipment would provide students with the tools that they needto learn. It is hard to write papers if there aren't enough desks and chairs. It is hard to learnwhen the blackboards are so old that they can't be erased properly. It is also difficult toorganize school supplies without proper bookshelves and cabinets.
Another plus that new equipment would provide is that it would make the school moreattractive to the community. It is hard for a community to be proud of a school that isfalling apart. If the community felt that out school was important, perhaps others would givemore money in the future. That would allow us to further improve our school. In addition, maybe community members would feel encouraged to come and help out in the school. Thatwould make it even better.
Students would be happier with new equipment. It would make them want to come to schooland learn. There would be fewer dropouts. By continuing in their education, these students willbe able to better contribute to our community in the future—perhaps even becoming furtherschoolteachers.
While there are many things that can be purchased with a gift of money at our school, I believethat new equipment is the best choice. New equipment would improve the learningenvironment, the community's attitude, and the students' feelings about their school.
重点单词 全部解释
benefit['benifit]n. 利益，津贴，保险金，义卖，义演
vt.
contribute[kən'tribju:t]vt. 捐助，投稿
vi. 投稿，贡献，是原因
attractive[ə'træktiv]adj. 有吸引力的，引起注意的
addition[ə'diʃən]n. 增加，附加物，加法
community[kə'mju:niti]n. 社区，社会，团体，共同体，公众，[生]群落
generous['dʒenərəs]adj. 慷慨的，宽宏大量的，丰盛的，味浓的
organize['ɔ:gənaiz]v. 组织
understand[.ʌndə'stænd]vt. 理解，懂，听说，获悉，将 ... 理解为，认为<
specific[spi'sifik]adj. 特殊的，明确的，具有特效的
n. 特
environment[in'vaiərənmənt]n. 环境，外界
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